story in jogja

koreksi:

one day ny family went to Yogjakarta.That is the first time we went to Yogyakarta and we were interest.We started the jurnery from Malioboro road. were so happy at the time, but we did't know if one of our family member was gone. We called her and asked where was she!. We order she waiting in supermarket.We so panic and after that we met her in supermarket.When she look us, she ceried and apologizc. She was happy can looks us agein.

Sblm Koreksi:

one day my family had go ti Yogyakarta.This first time we go to Yogjakarta and we si interesting. We satrted the journery at Malioboro road. We so happy at the time, but we don't know if one members in family gone. We call she and question where she now? we order she waiting in supermarket. We so panic and after that we met in supermarket. When she look us, she cried and say sorry. She happy can looks us agein.